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Aug 31, 2008 15:01:09 GMT -7
Post by Ink® on Aug 31, 2008 15:01:09 GMT -7
Just some randomness from the brain of Ink.
Quiet, quiet, in the night
How silent things cause such fright
A sinister whisper in the breeze
Moving softly with practiced ease
Some things must come to an end
Like the life of foe or friend
A flash of sliver grace in the dark
A simple slash, a birhgt red mark
No scream to pierce the air
No noise as alert to the evil scare
Only a grin full of malice and dark intent
A light foot step the only hint
The glow of the moon is cold
As the morning is young the night is old
And with the first gray light of dawn
The murderer, the killer, is gone.
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Aug 31, 2008 15:02:20 GMT -7
Post by canadaboy on Aug 31, 2008 15:02:20 GMT -7
wow
its powerful good job
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Aug 31, 2008 16:11:54 GMT -7
Post by Colour or Lour™ on Aug 31, 2008 16:11:54 GMT -7
I love those dark themed poems. ^^ That was great, Ink. I especially like the last line. This poem kind of reminds me of an old horror movie, not the cheesy kind just the grusome, bloody, no color kind. Don't know if that's what you were aiming for, but...
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Aug 31, 2008 18:21:57 GMT -7
Post by Ink® on Aug 31, 2008 18:21:57 GMT -7
*bows* Yes, praise me and grovel. Grovel!!
Um, sorry, just having a moment there. ^^
Thanks for the compliments all, I wasn't really having a point with it, I just wrote it in like a couple of minutes, probably 5-ish. That's what I do when I write poetry, I can't stand taking 20 years to come up with where I want it go and all so yeah. ^^
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Sept 1, 2008 13:58:10 GMT -7
Post by canadaboy on Sept 1, 2008 13:58:10 GMT -7
ALL HAIL INK
ALL HAIL INK
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Sept 1, 2008 14:49:16 GMT -7
Post by Ink® on Sept 1, 2008 14:49:16 GMT -7
That's a good minion. *pat pat* ^^
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Sept 1, 2008 15:38:56 GMT -7
Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 1, 2008 15:38:56 GMT -7
*AHEM* There shall only be one ruler on this forum and that is me. All members are my minions! ^^
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Sept 1, 2008 17:05:27 GMT -7
Post by canadaboy on Sept 1, 2008 17:05:27 GMT -7
yes but ill be the minion to the minion
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Sept 1, 2008 18:54:08 GMT -7
Post by Ink® on Sept 1, 2008 18:54:08 GMT -7
I shall be minion to none! Anyways Color, I'm older than you so I win. ^^
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Sept 2, 2008 16:09:35 GMT -7
Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 2, 2008 16:09:35 GMT -7
I wouldn't say you 'win' I'd say you, uh, how do I say this nicely... 'LOSE!' Cause younger is the sexiness
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Sept 2, 2008 18:15:49 GMT -7
Post by Ink® on Sept 2, 2008 18:15:49 GMT -7
Yeah, but remember, we decided death is nice and since I'm older I die sooner so ha! *is delusional from the fever* Jk, I'm just crazy anyways. ^^
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Sept 7, 2008 18:07:50 GMT -7
Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 7, 2008 18:07:50 GMT -7
Heh.
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Sept 7, 2008 19:49:12 GMT -7
Post by Ink® on Sept 7, 2008 19:49:12 GMT -7
Please learn from my mistakes! Let's dance to Joy Division!
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