The Jokerman
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Im gonna kill you.... And ya mum
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Post by The Jokerman on Sept 21, 2008 7:13:36 GMT -7
The Joker Versus Robin Part 1 Baiting The Birdy The Joker giggled to himself as he tore of the Batman symbol covering the light. Joker frisbeed it off the building and reached into his bag and pulled out his own R symbol knowing in some places Robin had put that up to call for his assisstance. The Joker Nailed it in place and walked around the back of it he turned on the light and shone it against the dark night sky. The Joker walked back around looking up at the sky, "Oh Boy Robins Coming" Then laughed dropping a duster from his sleeve and began cleaning the vents on top of the building, "Got to make this crap-hole look good for him" Joker said laughing again. He threw the duster off the building and turned on his heel. "And Here We Go and For my final act I beat up young Robin" The Joker laughed The Joker walked up onto a vent and to a high up satellite. He got a hand camera and tied it on. Then pressed record. Then whispered calmly "Hey Folks, Its me again Just little old me, Dont turn over, please dont turn over" The Joker cocked his head to the side and said in a low but loud growl "DONT TURN OVER" The Joker dropped down off the vent and into the opening of the roof top and looked around. The camera in one corner watching all that was to happen. A large box with 4 Rottweilers in that are trained to Jokers commands and inbetween the Vents, Thin Hidden Weaponry. The Joker laughed and looked up and said "Here it comes"....
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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 21, 2008 12:23:46 GMT -7
You're very good at being in character with the joker!
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Post by Ink® on Sept 21, 2008 15:02:23 GMT -7
The detail is good and like Lour said, you're good at being in character. I think with more practice you could be a very good writier. *nods* I'd say try to make the sentences flow together better to make it easier to read. Some of them are a bit choppy and you shaould add a bit more variety to the beginnis og each one because it almost always started with either 'the Joker' or 'then'.
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The Jokerman
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Post by The Jokerman on Sept 21, 2008 19:41:05 GMT -7
The Joker Versus Robin Part 2 Lets Play A Game Robin landed swiftly his cape still flapping furious in the wind behind him his grapple gun being re-attached to his belt. "Do you not have something better to do? Like play around with Batman?" "No, no, no, no, no," The joker repeated calmly "I dont, and anyway the Batman hasnt been playing out recently so I thought I might get to play with you. So Mr Robin, what game do you want to play" As the Joker did this he walked around Robin and sniffed deeply. Robins face became a piece which kind of said 'Oh No You Didnt' The Robin cocked his head to the side and said "How about this game, throw the big ugly clown in prison, Do you wanna play that?" Robin said in a cocky way. "Yes that game would be rather humorus" The Joker agreed "But No, I want to play some other games first of all, You know what I'm getting at" His hands opened the first vent and he reached in taking out a tommy gun. "You Like It? See Me and you play, I play shooter you play Victim" The Joker laughed shooting wildly at Robins legs knowing if he jumped upwards he would be caught in 1 of the pieces of netting. The Robin jumped across the building and right infront of the Rottweiler box. The Joker reached into his pocket and twirled out a bright gold whistle, a dog whistle....
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The Jokerman
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Post by The Jokerman on Sept 22, 2008 15:41:31 GMT -7
The Joker Versus Robin Part 3 Woof The Joker tooted the whistle but no sound came out the Joker mock shook it. Then said "Oh Yeah" as Three dogs tore out of the cage. One Dog Latched onto Robins leg another attaching to Robins wrist. The last dog dived for Robins small bare open neck but recieved a smack from Robins bo-staff. The dog in a obvious daze wobbled and fell off the building. Robin didnt mean to do it of course why would he do such a thing. The dog from his Leg then dived at his throat. Robin lashed out and punched the dog in the nooze putting it into a daze. Then kicking the dog that was on his arm off him. The 1st Dog went back for his prize. The Dog Aimed For Robins chest. Robin Twirled and smashed the bo-staff into the center of the Dog's chest stopping its heart. Robin's hand reached deep into a belt pouch dropping 2 smoke pellets to the ground. A Twisted smile spread across the Jokers face. "You Like to play games huh?" The Robin said "How about this game, 1 out of 3 chance, get it wrong, Game Over..." The Robin taunted. "Ooo Hide and Seek My Favourite" The Joker giggled laughing...[/center]
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