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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Aug 31, 2008 11:32:59 GMT -7
Live every day like it's the last one you'll live. Love your enemies as if they are your friends. Remember that to take you have to give. Remember your heart can break but still mends.
Try to enjoy all your inconvenient tasks. Laugh at something that has made you cry. Keep each memory and make sure it lasts. Even when you fail, be proud you could try.
Pur your fear aside and forget about it. Know that your goals are not out of reach. Revenge is an awful thing to get and peace is a lesson you should always teach.
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Post by canadaboy on Aug 31, 2008 14:49:03 GMT -7
wow that is relly inspiring did u write it yourself?
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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Aug 31, 2008 16:13:38 GMT -7
Yeah... I was really bored today, so I grabbed a piece of paper and a pen and just started writing words. Glad you liked it!
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Post by canadaboy on Aug 31, 2008 16:23:34 GMT -7
Ya. It's extremeyl moving and powerful.
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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Aug 31, 2008 16:28:40 GMT -7
Wow! I'm really glad.
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Post by Ink® on Aug 31, 2008 18:27:47 GMT -7
Aw, it's nice. ^^
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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 1, 2008 7:12:43 GMT -7
Why thank you, Ink.
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Post by Ink® on Sept 1, 2008 11:49:32 GMT -7
Your poetry all has a very distinct tone/ feeling to it that's pretty unique to you. You don't try to sound like other people. And that's good. ^^
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Post by canadaboy on Sept 1, 2008 13:59:25 GMT -7
i find that piece something that could be quoted over and over again if you get it published (can you i dont know)
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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 1, 2008 15:39:32 GMT -7
I can try!
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Post by canadaboy on Sept 1, 2008 17:08:02 GMT -7
you should than become rich and give me a cut of the profits for suggesting you do that
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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 1, 2008 17:08:33 GMT -7
How's 50 dollars?
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Post by canadaboy on Sept 1, 2008 17:17:40 GMT -7
haha NO lol
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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 1, 2008 17:18:56 GMT -7
Well, 100 would be tops
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Post by canadaboy on Sept 1, 2008 17:26:47 GMT -7
thats much better
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