We are murderers, liars, and thieves

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We are murderers, liars, and thieves Sept 18, 2008 17:29:42 GMT -7

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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 18, 2008 17:29:42 GMT -7

We are murderers, liars, thieves
Killing lives of hopes and dreams
False within our own beliefs
Stealing innocence from the weak

We are filthy, greedy, wrong
Make mistakes and seek to harm
Want much more than we deserve
Only wishing to be served

We are crazy, hopeless, none too wise
Make mistakes too many times
Won't let others mend our wounds
Yet we have it so confused

Don't lie to me bitch.

Ink® Skin Technician [What's your rusty spoon?] Posts: 1,798	We are murderers, liars, and thieves Sept 18, 2008 17:36:03 GMT -7 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ink® on Sept 18, 2008 17:36:03 GMT -7 I like it, but you should make your rhyme scheme more consistant.
	Do I scare you? Really!? I'm so happy. It's fun to scare people. ^^ laughter. Kill me once shame on you, kill me twice shame on me. ^^ I'll rise but I won't shine. =]

Colour or Lour™ Administrator Obsessive Pirates Fan Posts: 1,626	We are murderers, liars, and thieves Sept 18, 2008 17:36:51 GMT -7 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 18, 2008 17:36:51 GMT -7 I made it odd on purpose!
	Don't lie to me bitch.

Ink® Skin Technician [What's your rusty spoon?] Posts: 1,798	We are murderers, liars, and thieves Sept 18, 2008 17:39:00 GMT -7 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ink® on Sept 18, 2008 17:39:00 GMT -7 Oh, okay.
	Do I scare you? Really!? I'm so happy. It's fun to scare people. ^^ laughter. Kill me once shame on you, kill me twice shame on me. ^^ I'll rise but I won't shine. =]

Colour or Lour™ Administrator Obsessive Pirates Fan Posts: 1,626	We are murderers, liars, and thieves Sept 18, 2008 17:40:17 GMT -7 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 18, 2008 17:40:17 GMT -7 That's right. Walk away! Just keeeep walkin' cause it is okay!
	Don't lie to me bitch.

Ink® Skin Technician [What's your rusty spoon?] Posts: 1,798	We are murderers, liars, and thieves Sept 18, 2008 17:44:08 GMT -7 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ink® on Sept 18, 2008 17:44:08 GMT -7 It's ohhhhhhh kay! stalks off
	Do I scare you? Really!? I'm so happy. It's fun to scare people. ^^ laughter. Kill me once shame on you, kill me twice shame on me. ^^ I'll rise but I won't shine. =]

We are murderers, liars, and thieves

Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 18, 2008 17:29:42 GMT -7

Post by Ink® on Sept 18, 2008 17:36:03 GMT -7

Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 18, 2008 17:36:51 GMT -7

Post by Ink® on Sept 18, 2008 17:39:00 GMT -7

Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 18, 2008 17:40:17 GMT -7

Post by Ink® on Sept 18, 2008 17:44:08 GMT -7