A random murder.

[Imagine]

A random murder.
(I'm in a dark mood, so decided to write about a murder)

It didn't make sense,
what a foreign suspense.
No reason is found,
no future is bound.

No motives are taken,
only emotions are shaken.
There is no hope,
now tied up in rope.

Shaking with fright,
this isn't right.
You hear a hack,
now all is black.

[Ink®]

That's neat, I like it. And I see you used stanzas this time. ^^
You like that rhyme scheme don't ou? YOu used it in that other poem too.

[canadaboy]

i like the last part! "you hear a hack now all is black"

[Imagine]

Ink: Yeah the stanza's make the flow better, and yeah the scheme is easy for me to write with.

Canadaboy: Leaves a good ending eh?

[canadaboy]

Oui! Certainement.

[Colour or Lour™]

Yeah I agree with canadaboy I lurve the hack thing. ^^