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Post by Zorsin on Sept 7, 2008 21:04:05 GMT -7
Look at me Thats all i want Clean the house Do good in school Get on the honor role...
Notice me.. Please....
Join cheerleading Be the best Ask for them to see you at a game
Notice me... Please.. Thats all i want...
Start failing school Go to school late Start getting in trouble
Notice me.. See me... Please... Thats all i want....
Ditch school Start Drinking Start Drugs Stay out late Maybe all night
Notice me... See me... Please... Thats all i want...
Yell at the teachers Get in fights Break into houses Run from the police
Notice me... See me... Please... Thats all i want.
Give up
They don't notice me... They don't see me... THey don't care...
All i wanted was for them to...
Care for me.. Love me... Teach me... See me... Hang out with me...
Give up. They don't care They don't see
So slice my wrist deep. Deeper, deeper, deeper Swallow those pills Then lay down to sleep.
I drift off to sleep WIth one last thought... I just wanted to be seen
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Post by Ink® on Sept 8, 2008 12:05:35 GMT -7
Once again, really sad but really good. I don't know if you've ever read the book Starydog the auther's last name is Koja, I can't remember her first name) but it kind of reminds me of the main character's essay/ story thing about the dog named Grrl. Which is a good thing, in my opinion. ^^
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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 8, 2008 16:30:47 GMT -7
Really sad but awesome! It's one of those things that could easily be turned into a song at one point....
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Post by Zorsin on Sept 8, 2008 16:57:43 GMT -7
Thank you guys! And yeah, it can easily be turned into a song. And no, i never read that book, but i will have to read it sometime.
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Post by Ink® on Sept 8, 2008 18:48:27 GMT -7
It's really short and it's kind of strange. I don't know, I really like it but at the same time I hate it. *shrug* I still reccomend it though. I think her first name is Kathe but I'm not certain.
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Post by Zorsin on Sept 8, 2008 19:01:36 GMT -7
Okay. Thank you! Ill check into it. ^.^
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Post by canadaboy on Sept 9, 2008 18:01:47 GMT -7
wow i LUV it
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Post by Zorsin on Sept 10, 2008 17:09:06 GMT -7
Thank you.
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