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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 6, 2008 16:06:25 GMT -7
Freefall- That's what leaves do, when the Summer ends. Freefall like the leaves, and you'll be happy. Set like the sun and let yourself let go. Then rise up again every day, just so you know you still can. Behave like a flower that grows, is strong and then wilts at the end of it's short but happy life. This is so weird, I'm guessing not many or nobody will like it. It's odd and has no rhyme scheme. It's hardly a poem.... and the word choice isn't poetic.
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Post by Ink® on Sept 6, 2008 16:34:09 GMT -7
It's sort of bad, but I kind of like it somehow anyways. ^^
The stanzas are all uneven and one line only has one word, and yeah, it's just crap but as I said, I like it. ^^
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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 6, 2008 16:35:35 GMT -7
Same here
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Post by canadaboy on Sept 6, 2008 19:02:48 GMT -7
actually i like it without thinking its crap rofl
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Post by Ink® on Sept 6, 2008 20:24:08 GMT -7
Well each to their own opinions then. ^^
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Post by lechin on Sept 7, 2008 16:44:02 GMT -7
I'm not that much of a poem person but I like it.
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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 7, 2008 17:47:54 GMT -7
Sweet!
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Post by Ink® on Sept 7, 2008 19:55:50 GMT -7
Haha, I guess I'm the bully here then. <3
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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 8, 2008 16:34:25 GMT -7
You never change do you? Lawl (she's always been a bully)
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Post by Ink® on Sept 8, 2008 16:44:34 GMT -7
And I always will be! *super hero pose*
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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 8, 2008 17:17:12 GMT -7
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Post by Ink® on Sept 8, 2008 19:21:43 GMT -7
Dude, you keep spamming the place up. I ahve half a mind that it's just so you can get your post count up...
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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 8, 2008 19:22:30 GMT -7
No, I'm just so bored. Sorry! ^^ I keep being like, dot dot dot. ..... I'll stop
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Post by Ink® on Sept 8, 2008 19:23:46 GMT -7
Okay good. (wow, I have to tell the admin to stop spamming, sounds a bit backwords, ya. ^^)
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Post by Colour or Lour™ on Sept 8, 2008 19:24:13 GMT -7
shut up! It's "bad for the publicity" lawl
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